14.1.10

Main Task: Feedback Teacher (1)

Today our teacher, Mrs Downes watched what we had achieved last term on our main task and gave us feedback. She said that the company logos and the graphics we used were nice as well as the opening of our film. She also said it was quite hard to understand the story at the moment because we haven't included the sounds, narrative voiceover or captions to explain the story. She also pointed out:
  • 00:29:03 - there is a very "hissy" sound
  • 00:44:02 - "drags" a bit

She also asked:

  • Who is good?
  • Who is bad?
  • How do I know?
  • Why should I care?

We intend to address all of these things over the next few weeks during the production of our film beginning.

( Gabi )

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