The following things were pointed out by the teachers:
1. The music and the graphics are good
2. The voice over used for two of the characters still sounds as though it has been recorded inside even though in the film the characters appear outside
3. The titles are too difficult to read
4. The editing needs to be improved so it is sharper
We are now going to use the following lesson and any other time we have to fix these things and improve our film so that we can achieve the best mark possible.
( Gabi )
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