27.1.10

Main Task: Feedback (3)

At this point our film is completed apart from a few small things which we have to change. Last time we got feedback from our classmates, we had not yet added the voice over so it was hard for them to understand the storyline. We looked at the previous feedback and edited our film accordingly. Even though it is not completely finished, we decided to export our film anyway as a media player file and show our classmates again and see what they thought of the end result. We've asked them to place comments on this post so we can consider their opinions.

( James & Gabi )

8 comments:

Kim and Jenny AS Media said...

I think that over all it is good, the only thing that needed to be changed when I watched it was the audio as it was recorded inside, it didnt sound like they were actually talking when you watched it. Also it sounded like they were reading it off of a script they need to put more emotion into it and make it sound more like a proper conversation.

Ahmed (Shamedia) said...

its a great video, used lots of different types of shots. The music syncs perfectly with each shot, also the voices of the people was loud and clear which is a good, however there is a shot where one of the character is on his phone, you can see his lips moving but there is no sound instead the person he is talking to on the phone is heard. Other than that its a great opening.

The girls; said...

I thought that your film was good and had very good ideas.
I like the idea of the conference call and the three different characters coming from different places and ending up at the same place.
However, the sound was a bit off and the voice recording sounded too much like it was recorded in a room and not the same place that it had been filmed. Also the characters mouths were sometimes moving when there was no speech.
It was a nice change from all of the horror genre films. Good work :) !
Lisa Mitchell

Sharam said...

Ok The video that your group made is really exceptional. As I saw it for the time it felt like watchihng a very high quality movie. The effects that your group have used in the making of your movie is amazing. All the titles and effects are well done.

SHAmedia Productions said...

Everything was really good except of the storyline, I thought it was a bit boring but the different shots and the music made it interesting. Good work!

Sharam said...

Not going to lie it reminded me of the Oceans, which is good considering they are one of my favourite films. I thought the sound wasnt the best it was quite hard to hear what they where saying but other than that the film was a great sucess

well done !!!

Charlie Lambourne

The girls; said...

its a great video. I really like the construction with all the different areas, where the film has been made. But i think its a little bit to much walking and there happens nothing special.
But the construction with the mobiles and the different people walking to eachother is very good.
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Sharam said...

Personally I think the film is well made. The music fits the mood of the film and the shots that are used are varied. I also liked the way that the three characters were brought together by a shot showing two different things which then joined together. If I was to make one criticism then it would have to be that there is too much walking for my liking. If some of this was cut out then it would speed up the story a little bit.
Well done.
Gregor Sharp